Corey’s Tanka Poem

16 02 2008

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A violent, dark storm.

The lightning strikes the ground hard.

Loud thunder shakes us.

The sky is really pitch black.

The rain makes really big floods.

 

by Corey B.


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21 02 2008
Grammy

Corey, When I read your poem, I felt like I wanted to be near a warm fireplace and watch the storm out of the window…very cool poem. grammy

21 02 2008
Auntie

Wow, you used a lot of descriptive language…this thunderstorm sounds scarry, but it kindof makes me want to be in one too!

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